Let me congratulate you for what you wrote


It's so nice


But ... I think you can do better than this


There are some weak sentences and expressions in there


you have to work a little bit harder to reach that level of perfection


Let me say again .... what you wrote was so nice


Good luck with your next participation


We'll be waiting for it


and we don't mind if you want to write in English .. you'll find someone to read it and appreciate it


At least I'll do